Minding the Commas and Colons
I always enjoy reading your articles on language and punctuation.
However, I have just read your comments on the “Oxford comma,” a punctuation abomination I have fumed against for years (The Legal Writer, December 2012). But, imagine my shock as I read your example: “Liz, Anne and I wrote to Nick last week, but he still has not responded.”
I cannot resist pointing out what Mother Gabriel drilled into our young heads at St. Lawrence Grade School: When you join two independent clauses in one sentence with a conjunction, separate them with a comma.
(I ran, but Charlie fell.) However, if one of the clauses has a comma in it, use a semicolon. (Frightened, I ran; but Charlie fell.)
A small note … and I am forever gratified to learn victory has been declared over the Oxford comma.
Chris Ledwidge, Portland
Not Loving It
The November Bar Bulletin published an article describing Susan Saladoff’s film “Hot Coffee” promoting plaintiff personal injury cases (Profiles in the Law).
Contingency fee lawyers tend to neglect the fact that the money to pay awards and settlements and lawyers comes from somewhere. It comes from stockholders and pensioners and employees and owners of every business which is sued, and it comes from everyone who owns a mutual fund, a large percentage of the population, because mutual funds own interests in virtually every business. Of course, it comes from everyone who buys insurance and it comes from everyone who pays taxes, directly or indirectly. Many personal injury cases involve injuries that are not catastrophic or life threatening. One could ask fairly enough: if your neighbor suffered general damages in a car accident, would you give her or him $100 from your own pocket? That is exactly what everyone does, except the amounts are much larger.
As to catastrophic cases and as to routine cases too, plaintiff lawyers like to emphasize injuries and disability in order to recover more money. Yet, it is in the interest of the injured party to recover as much as possible and lead a happy and productive life in spite of the injury, whether it is large or small. There is a conflict between the desire of the plaintiff to recover and be healthy, and the desire of the lawyer to maximize the recovery.
As to McDonalds, any person who drinks coffee knows that it is hot and hurts you if you spill it, and it hurts more if you spill it on a sensitive area of the body. It is not necessary for the plaintiff to know exactly how hot the coffee is. Common sense tells us the cause of the injury, unless there are facts yet unknown, is the carelessness of the plaintiff in spilling hot coffee. Once again, one could ask whether it would be just to ask your neighbor to give the plaintiff $100 from her own pocket because she spilled coffee on herself.
If our society wanted to tell McDonalds they have to say on their coffee how hot it is, or how it could injure you, or provide some warning, it should be done by legislation and regulation in which all interested parties can plead their case. That is the democratic way.
There should be discussion of general damages and our tort system rather than routine acceptance of the claims of plaintiff lawyers.
Roger B. Ley, Astoria
Oregon teams have won the national We the People competition four times, not three times as reported in the December 2012 issue of the Bulletin (“Celebrating Oregon’s Civics Champions”). Portland’s Lincoln High School took top honors in the 2012 national competition last spring.
We Love Letters
The Bulletin welcomes letters. In general, letters should pertain to recent articles, columns or other letters and should be limited to 250 words.
Send letters to: Editor, OSB Bulletin, P.O. Box 231935, Tigard, OR 97281.